Thursday, September 10, 2009

Character Writing


Carlisle Cullen
Carlisle Cullen has been brought to life by Stephenie Meyer in Twilight. He is one of the main protaginist vampires in this book because he shows how he cares for Bella and his family's saftey and will risk his life for her protection.

On page 17 when Meyer shows that the Cullens live in the gloomy town of forks. Because the cullens are introduced on the first day of school. This also shows why they would live here so that they would'nt get noticed later when he shouldnt be alive.

On page 331 it shows when the main problem starts when James(the tracker) smells Bella and when Carlisle sticks up for his family. when he says "she's with us" (refering to Bella) and then James says "you brought a snack" and then again Carlisle says "shes with us" and that also shows he has a pleasent temperment because most people would shout it out.

On page 293 it shows that Carlisle is 359 years old when Edward says " London in the 1560's" and then Carlisle says "The London of my youth" and that means he can control his thirst when he is around blood and humans all day at work.



1 comment:

Michael said...

Pretty good work here, Saige. You've used quotes to bolster your points on how Meyer has build Carlisle.

Do you think they may be living in rainy Forks because of being sensitive to sun and sunlight themselves? I wondered about that.

Saige, could you please hit the edit button and go back in and just clean up capital letters and punctuation marks. Your writing isn't bad, and that attention to detail will make it much better.